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Vee thee poet
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Dear Ma'
Momma
My hands cannot write enough
No to pay for your unending love
Love that moved me from scrap
To a decency I'd not match
How am i to reconstruct?
Nine of my first
I crawled around your belly
Creating scenes that preyed you
Like the smoke of the clouds
You felt the weight Ma'
Did you not keep on?
Years later
I'm still your darling
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Eating from your plate
Sleeping on your laps Ma'
Even at an old body self
You see me not old , your child still
I bow down in secret
I'm your secrdetary to God
Submitting the minutes of your service
So he'd create more for you
Years of age,more around me
With love Ma', simply love
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Vee thee poet’s timeline
- May 2023
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19 FriAnniversary
One year of membership
- May 2022
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20 FriReceived a critique
on Dear Ma' from @scribbler
"I suspect that English is your second language . I can't imagine trying to write poetry in my non native language. But there are so resultant trip in your poem so I hope you don't mind my reposting it with some changes…" -
20 FriReceived a critique
on Dear Ma' from @Race_9togo
"I like this, but the word "secrdetary" I don't understand. Shold it be "secretary", or something else?" -
19 ThuFirst publication
Dear Ma'
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19 ThuJoined Neopoet
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Location: Kenya rift valley, KEN
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