Lindame

Member since June 6, 2020

Member for 5 years, 11 months

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Speaking of Eve

Posted Mar 14, 2021 · 8 lines · 2 critiques

Her voice is like velvet petals
Hidden amongst the lilies,
Wearing her heart on her face
Held in tranquil hands grace,

Red birds welcome her presence
As the snake of eloquence
Guides her to burn to write
In spite of the elements of night.

Lindame’s timeline

June 2025
06 Fri

Anniversary
5 years of membership
June 2021
06 Sun

Anniversary
One year of membership
March 2021
15 Mon

Received a critique
on Speaking of Eve from @lovedly
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15 Mon

Received a critique
on If Only from @lovedly
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14 Sun

Received a critique
on Speaking of Eve from @Michael Anthony
"Hi Lindame, I enjoyed this! The two stanzas could easily stand separately on their own as poems. I especially liked: "As the snake of eloquence guides her to burn to write." - wonderful. I also liked the brevity here -…"
14 Sun

Posted a poem
Speaking of Eve
"Her voice is like velvet petals"
Open thread 8 lines
July 2020
15 Wed

Posted a poem
Pinned
"When you get pinned"
Open thread 17 lines
June 2020
28 Sun

Most-discussed work
Why My Poetry Sucks (Title prompt)

13 critiques to date.
28 Sun

Posted a poem
Why My Poetry Sucks (Title prompt)
"Too tired"
Open thread 10 lines
07 Sun

First critique offered
on "Leaf and Tree" (since unpublished) by @coosh1
06 Sat

First publication
Lindame
06 Sat

Joined Neopoet
Membership begins

First poem published 1 days later.