thePoetess

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Two Little Babies (a haiku)

Posted Jun 1, 2012 · 3 lines · 5 critiques

two little babies
different in appearance
but loved both the same

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on Two Little Babies (a haiku) from @weirdelf
"you started well, despite criticism. Consider haiku and senryu as a way a distilling words to their most potent meaning, or arranging tiny gems into a piece of transcendent beauty. I wish you and Wesley especially to re…"
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Received a critique
on Two Little Babies (a haiku) from @scribbler
"The per line syllable count is correct but I think if you check that Haiku should be nature related and usually deals with a change based on seasons. stan"
02 Sat

Received a critique
on Two Little Babies (a haiku) from @Barbara Writes
"Since haiku is seasonal and about nature in its form, just as Jess said it dosen't capture haiku essence. There are many books on haiku and website that will help aid you. Thereby showing you the differences."
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Two Little Babies (a haiku)
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Two Little Babies (a haiku)
"two little babies"
Open thread 3 lines
May 2012
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Posted: 1 June, 2012

Updated: 19 June, 2012

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Working With Japanese Poetry	(syllabus)	Splash Pool	Started 2012-06-10	Concluded
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