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Toyemlaw
Member since February 11, 2021
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Garden of Life
The Supreme One detached the sky and the earth,
Split the Sun and moon,created stars.
The creator created a creature,
to tender and nurture the creatures he created
Flowers in the garden, life in the garden
Flower wither,flower blossom
The sole of each life
Water watered the flower garden
The soul in the soil, sprout radiant
The length and quality reside in him
Some thorns, some roses and daffodils
Rose felt love and spread same
Torn was bitter, so he spread hatred
The vine dresser pluck out at will
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Some at dawn, Other at dusk
Time and season happens to them all
Watch the flower flaunt in the garden.
Flower of life, soon food for another.
Toyemlaw
(c)People's Poet
Toyemlaw’s timeline
- February 2026
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11 WedAnniversary
5 years of membership
- February 2022
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11 FriAnniversary
One year of membership
- February 2021
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12 FriReceived a critique
on Garden of Life from @Lavender
"Hello, Toyemlaw, Welcome! Lots to think about in your poem - I especially appreciated the image of the sun and moon splitting, and the creation of the stars. A bit of sparkling magic! Your last line is strong and brings…" -
11 Thu
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11 ThuReceived a critique
on Garden of Life from @scribbler
"Welcome to Neopoet. Using the garden to represent life was well done.......stan" -
11 ThuFirst publication
Garden of Life
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I'm an upcoming poet, people's poet
is what people call me.
Location: Nigeria, Lagos
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