ThisIsMe

Member since October 10, 2019

Member for 6 years, 7 months

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9 Poems

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My Saving Sea

Posted Aug 31, 2020 · 13 lines · 1 critiques

Great ocean of uncertainty

What secrets do you hold?

What wonders have you spoken of

What lies have you told?

We sail so far without a clue

Beyond your dazzling shore...

To leave behind our fears and doubts

Hoping we find more.

What can save our wayward souls

From what we used to be?

All we’ve found from sailing far

Is that it cannot be the sea.

ThisIsMe’s timeline

October 2024
10 Thu

Anniversary
5 years of membership
October 2020
10 Sat

Anniversary
One year of membership
September 2020
01 Tue

Received a critique
on My Saving Sea from @Gracy
"Hi ThisIsMe, I have not read your poems before. This one is haunting, makes one think. The title and content are interesting, I'm not sure about your final two verses. Maybe you can tell us. There's a fantastic book by…"
August 2020
31 Mon

Posted a poem
My Saving Sea
"Great ocean of uncertainty"
Open thread 13 lines
January 2020
01 Wed

Received a critique
on Supersaturated from @Sparrow 42
"A great write just be careful of writing about something that isn't true.. I am a sponge, I absorb.. Nothing passes through me.. A natural sponge has holes that go right through it. So I would put that line as:- I am a…"
01 Wed

Received a critique
on To My Dead Love from @Geezer
"Then you will appreciate my upcoming chat room. My co-host Carrie and I will be hosting a chat called Chat on the Darkside! It is something I used to do a few years ago before we had a big crash and we lost our chat. De…"
December 2019
30 Mon

Posted a poem
To My Dead Love
"Where is my body?"
Open thread 43 lines
November 2019
15 Fri

Posted a poem
I
"In a world full of sorrow, "
Open thread 18 lines
October 2019
15 Tue

Highest posting month
October 2019 — 5 poems
13 Sun

First critique offered
on " The Demise Of A Witch (October Contest)" by @Patricia
10 Thu

First publication
Supersaturated
10 Thu

Most-discussed work
Supersaturated

14 critiques to date.
10 Thu

Joined Neopoet
Membership begins

First poem published 1 days later.