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ThEdges
Member since September 28, 2015
Member for 10 years, 8 months
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126
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ThEdges’s timeline
- September 2025
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28 SunAnniversary
10 years of membership
- September 2020
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28 MonAnniversary
5 years of membership
- September 2016
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28 WedAnniversary
One year of membership
- December 2015
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24 ThuReceived a critique
on Realizations from @Esker
"and that it is real and because U use punctuation Hope the driving has good weather im getting through my xmas well surviving it... thank U" -
04 Fri
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04 FriReceived a critique
on Him from @wesley snow
"However, I'm willing to bet that you only know two or three ways to rhyme a poem when there are many, many more. Initial rhyme, internal rhyme, random rhyme (what you generally write in is random rhyme) and more still…" -
03 ThuReceived a critique
on My Childhood from @Sparrow
"You know very well that 42 is the answer to everything, poor babies we have just raised another brood lol, Yours as always Ian.xx" -
03 ThuReceived a critique
on My Childhood from @Sparrow
"My oh my what with you being 61 and Jess being only 58 I think we should start a separate place for the young ones. If my memory was better I would remember those good old days when I was that age lol, Have a lovely mid…" -
02 WedReceived a critique
on My Childhood from @scribbler
"So the poem reads well as is. And all young people think their elders talk just to hear their own voices lol. I'm about to turn 61 and the body I have pushed to its limits for so many years is starting to betray me. So…" -
02 Wed
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02 WedReceived a critique
on My Childhood from @wesley snow
"Much better. The poem simply rolled on with no stops. Marvelous edits. I needed you to know that I check." - November 2015
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29 SunCritiqued
"All hallows Eve" by @Lonnie
"I just got great praise of your work from weirdelf, and came here to read one of your poems, and I was not disappointed! He said we had similar style and I clearly see that here. Thanks for sharing! Best always, Laura" -
15 Sun
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15 SunCritiqued
"Who Cares??" by @Sparrow
"I'm so glad that my poem inspired you to write a poem! That's great---though the topic is, this time, terrible. There is a great lack of caring in the world, and yes, the beasts and the children always suffer the most…" -
14 SatCritiqued
"THE SHUNNING edit" by @Geremia
"this is powerful, and I, and I'm sure a lot of others, can relate to it." -
11 Wed
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11 Wed
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10 TueCritiqued
"Everyone Lies" by @Tylana
"This is deeply emotional and also organized very well. ((( Tylana )))" -
08 SunCritiqued
"Grateful for Glenda. (Thanks)" by @wesley snow
"those are my favorite. ...I thought maybe this was one of them. ..it seemed to flow utterly effortlessly. Best always, Laura" - October 2015
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07 WedNew follower
@Barbara Writes
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03 SatNew follower
@Joan Rolls
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01 ThuFirst critique offered
on "Not tomorrow (The Final print do read as most missed it)" by @lovedly
- September 2015
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28 MonFirst publication
Cursed? (since unpublished)
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28 MonJoined Neopoet
Membership begins
First poem published 1 days later.
About Me
About me
my beautiful cat, Peaches. I had her for 17 amazing years...she was very verbal and precious! She'd say, "I'm jumping up in your lap now------ready?"
RIP Peaches, my baby girl!
Location: California, United States, USA
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