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Terumi Sakurai
Member since April 23, 2024
Member for 2 years, 1 month
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New lights
Before my eyes snow was twinkling,
An ethereal view, raining
The peak of the mountain takes its white coat
As eagles gather above
I'm hypnotized, lost in my tracks
Falling into a neverending crack
Until eventually a bird start singing,
And my eyes slowly start blinking.
Terumi Sakurai’s timeline
- April 2025
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23 WedAnniversary
One year of membership
- May 2024
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17 FriReceived a critique
on New lights from @tyro
"I think the title is right on, because the ending does suggest a kind of enlightenment. I like the feel of it and it has good images. Maybe the first line should be in the present tense." -
17 FriReceived a critique
on New lights from @Geezer
"It does not seem that it is right that you describe the ethereal view as raining, when in the line before, you have said that "Before my eyes snow was twinkling." You need an [ess] at the end of bird. ~ Geezer. ." -
17 Fri
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14 Tue
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12 SunReceived a critique
on Ways of loving from @Rula
"Congratulations! Creative indeed! Writing acrostics is always challenging Well done!" -
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- April 2024
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30 Tue
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29 MonFirst publication
Running brushes
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29 Mon
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23 TueNew follower
@mark
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23 TueJoined Neopoet
Membership begins
First poem published 6 days later.
About Me
About me
Inspired by music since childhood, I wrote my first work at 11. I then specialized in poetry for its sounds, after discovering songwriting at 16. I'm able to decently write poems in 4 languages as well as short length novels. I'm also translating my own work. My poetry writing is a useful tool to improve my language skills. I've become fluent in 2 languages by constantly searching new words for my works. I mostly work abour nature or feelings.
Location: France
Recent Work
New lights
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All the love I want
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Ways of loving
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In my soul wishing for a smile
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Spring fling flinching
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Running brushes
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Contest Wins
| Winning Submission | Contest | Contest Date |
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| Ways of loving | Neopoet Weekly 05/05/24 to 05/11/24 | – |