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systemicum
Member since March 10, 2026
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Kathy’s Song
I built you a monument in acid rain – my blood work just for you.
You made me feel like somebody.
Eventually, just like a child of entertainment.
Perpetuously, I oscillated between blind trust and pain.
A new error, as I see now – in my grief, the aftermath.
Only love can hurt like this.
And yet, I still believe it to be beautiful.
In a manner of speaking, I am just an analog guy in a digital world.
But not tonight. Because hope dies painless.
Red eyes from the pill I took.
For now, I am a robot, hear me glitch.
Sister of night, help me exit the grey.
Because black August has come already.
I know, the crow of Thanatos
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will guide me with the cold song.
The dreams are dead, but will be reborn
with grounds, stones and ancient spells.
But never ever, you will run me out again.
And so, I am still smiling,
looking for the rain to come.
systemicum’s timeline
- April 2026
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11 SatReceived a critique
on Kathy’s Song from @Geezer
"say it any better than the A.I. has; I see that you are a little more focused in this post. I like the oblique references to mystic arts and sorcery. I think you might have a story here. I would get rid of the pill and…" -
10 Fri
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05 SunReceived a critique
on 1.000 Δέντρα from @Geezer
"give better instruction than the A.I. on this post. After reading this over for the third time, and after the A.I. had commented, I began to see where this piece was going. I'm feeling that you have only begun to let th…" -
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- March 2026
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27 FriNew follower
@Lavender
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24 TueCritiqued
"My Last Love Poem" by @Lavender
"I do not yet feel I "earned" this right. But I do have to say: I love your rich and versatile vocabulary - a lot to be learned from that! So wonderful, how you open and close the poet: "I hesitate to rhyme too soon abou…" -
24 TueFirst critique offered
on "My Last Love Poem" by @Lavender
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23 Mon
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23 MonReceived a critique
on Resistance. The Manifest. from @Lavender
"Thank you for sharing your insight. It's felt throughout. L" -
23 Mon
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21 SatReceived a critique
on Resistance. The Manifest. from @Geezer
"of a story; a three-part novel actually. I don't remember the name of it, but I remember the theme was written from the perspective of a fictional soul, living in India as he witnesses the transformation of his country…" -
21 SatNew follower
@Sen99
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18 WedReceived a critique
on Resistance. The Manifest. from @Lavender
"Hello! I see that this was originally published December 8, 2017. Can't help but feel it is regarding a specific major event on or around that date. I might be way off, but it feels full of conflict and so defiant. I'll…" -
17 TueReceived a critique
on The key keeper. from @Geezer
"Yeah, I was thinking more of a follow-up. Now, that he is back and chained to the furnace with his tongue hanging out and the soles of his feet blackened; does he feel the same way? LoL, ~ Geezer. Many times, I don't re…" -
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15 Sun
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11 WedFirst publication
The key keeper.
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11 Wed
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10 TueJoined Neopoet
Membership begins
First poem published 1 days later.
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Sometimes reality is too complex. Stories give it form. (Jean-Luc Godard)
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