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Sylvester L Eaves
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Palminervia leaf
We exchange blessing
grasping for air
as I breathe
intaking this smell of palminervia leaf
We eloped together as my nose touches yours
My mind puzzled
By its scent I think,
Simple matters in a palminervia leaf
Like simple life
Like oxygen in your lungs
like words spewed
as your breath
blows them words like the wind blows a palminervia leaf
flapping words through the bending of its leaf
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then away it goes
from my hand to the ground
the exchange blessing still exists
as spewed words
are in the mist.
Sylvester L Eaves’s timeline
- June 2023
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03 SatAnniversary
One year of membership
- June 2022
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30 ThuReceived a critique
on Palminervia leaf from @RoseBlack
"Welcome to neopoet. I love the comparison between the wedding and the palminervia leaf, the joining of the couple and the cycle of the leaf have a metaphoric meaning all wrapped into a gentle, loving blanket. Good read." -
30 Thu
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03 FriReceived a critique
on Palminervia leaf from @Candlewitch
"welcome to Neopoet! I hope your poetry finds a home here. if you have any questions about the site, or need help, just ask and I will try to help. if I can't, then I will find someone who can :) in this line: "blows (th…" -
03 FriReceived a critique
on Palminervia leaf from @Mr joghe
"I think your poem is metaphorical poem. Your love for natural things cannot be underestimated. I think you used an inanimate object 'flower' to buttress your emotional expression. The wedding takes place in line 1-5 'We…" -
03 FriFirst publication
Palminervia leaf
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03 FriJoined Neopoet
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