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suziwritessometimes
Member since October 26, 2012
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Wedding Day
WEDDING DAY
The meeting, the noticing, the realisation.
The butterflies, nervousness, anticipation.
Excitement that turns your insides out.
The dawning, the knowing; there is no doubt.
The second, the moment when two hearts collide.
The time of your life when there’s no more divide.
The decision, the choosing of bright, shiny gold.
The joy of sharing, no more secret to hold.
The shout to the sky, the moon and the sun.
“Today is the day that we become one!”
The vows, the tokens, the unification
The speeches, the toasts, the celebration.
The farewells, good wishes, a bouquet to cast
The starlight, the passion, alone at last.
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- October 2012
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31 WedCritiqued
"HUNT'S END" by @scribbler
"I have never hunted (or wanted to!) but I felt the emotion you are trying to convey. The title is succinct and accurate. I particularly liked the flow and rhythm. Well done!" -
31 WedFirst critique offered
on "HUNT'S END" by @scribbler
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29 MonReceived a critique
on Wedding Day from @Rula
"I really loved your couplets and enjoyed every word. Your daughter should be proud to have her father writing about her weddding day. I have nothing to offer except a suggestion to give a space between each couplet for…" -
29 MonReceived a critique
on Wedding Day from @Candlewitch
"This is a wonderful joyous poem that celebrates the joining of two lives. There isn't anything to not like about it! I enjoyed the flow and rhyming couplets. Keep on writing! My favorite lines are: Excitement that turns…" -
29 MonFirst publication
Wedding Day
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29 Mon
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26 FriJoined Neopoet
Membership begins
First poem published 3 days later.
About Me
About me
I want to share my poetry as I never really have before - just the occasional one for a specific purpose. (I wrote a poem for my daughter's wedding, for example!)
I have four children, 1 cat, a long-suffering husband and we have lived in Gibraltar for the last 9 months.
Location: GBR
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