sleepy-ria

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Posted Jun 24, 2019 · 5 lines · 2 critiques

There's a shadow that is cast upon the wall,
From the TV that drones mindlessly, ignored;
Forlorn and forgotten, a face hangs.
Perhaps, one day, I shall see whose shadow is cast,
But every time I turn my head the shadow passes.

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"One of my favourite definitions of poetry is 'The art of compression of meaning' and this achieves that superbly. Despite being written in the first person the theme is universal. It evocatively captures personal and te…"
June 2019
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"I like this very much. "TV that drones mindlessly, ignored;: this gives vividly the mood. Five lines but the middle line is where the poem hangs, in the identification of that face. The ;last two lines speaks of the spi…"
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I write bad poems and sing songs in the shower.

Location: New Zealand, NZL

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Poe

Wilde

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Bukowski.

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