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silens zeta
Member since November 11, 2014
Member for 11 years, 6 months
hydrology
to vanquish begins with a flame
expanding while separating the holy
many left in disregard wholly
the rest become a quest to tame
without this contradistinction
similarity breeds in only some
homogeneous now not all in sum
purity leads to extinction
in each fall we nourish the earth
regenerating flaw in each new son
but each still stretches towards the sun
squandering revisited worth
cup containing contraception
taking life of one from two
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past lives laid to squander too
yet we view a warm reception
this genetic composition
striving to keep itself plain
will malnourished open plains
never entering fruition
silens zeta’s timeline
- November 2024
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11 MonAnniversary
10 years of membership
- November 2019
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11 MonAnniversary
5 years of membership
- November 2015
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11 WedAnniversary
One year of membership
- November 2014
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25 TueFirst critique offered
on "SILENT SONGS ( extremely rare title change)" by @scribbler
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14 Fri
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13 Thu
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12 Wed
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11 TueFirst publication
hydrology
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11 Tue
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11 TueJoined Neopoet
Membership begins
First poem published 1 days later.
About Me
I am a young poet who mainly writes for pleasure. I always aim to improve my poetry and have been able to improve significantly just writing on my own. I now hope to improve my skills using the critiques or my peers and hopefully help someone else grow as well.
The first time I started having an interest in poetry was in the 4th grade memorizing Edgar A. Poe's "Eldorado" to recite for an audition, afterward I started writing poetry off and on up to the present of my early 20s. I am in college presently, but my major has absolutely no affiliation with poetry. My goal whenever I write a poem is to have a finished project that I want to memorize myself .
I would love the most technical critiques I can be given. Chances are anything I post outside of a workshop will be something I intend to spend hours or days critiquing and improving until I get something I truly want to remember, so I promise your inputs will be put to good use! I am sure I can decifer any technical literary terminology with the help of the internet! There is definitely a limit to my writing presently because I have been writing for myself thus far, but I finally have the confidence to write more geared toward an audience to create something others can hopefully get enjoyment from as well.
Edgar A. Poe
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