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Sergio Vagros
Member since May 22, 2012
Member for 14 years
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Stay
Soft
cool touch of lust
Inviting
shivers of recognition
Beyond
mortal comprehension
Your smell
energy that charges my soul
Sweet
taste of neck to lips
Liquid
embrace of whole
Never
leave me
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Your ghost
leaves me pleading
Rush
bids me play
Stay...
Sergio Vagros’s timeline
- May 2022
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22 SunAnniversary
10 years of membership
- May 2017
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22 MonAnniversary
5 years of membership
- May 2013
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22 WedAnniversary
One year of membership
- June 2012
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08 Fri
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08 FriReceived a critique
on Stay from @Roscoe Lane
"Just one crit, i'd remove fang and put lips or tongue. Apart from that i like this poem.I don't think i've read your work before, if this is the case. A heartfelt welcome to Neopoet Sergio Vagros. Regards Roscoe..." -
07 Thu
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07 ThuCritiqued
"Mr. Mirror" by @paul
"Mirrors are portals to anywhere Ones soul wishes to go...I liked this poem.." -
07 ThuCritiqued
"Mr. Mirror" by @paul
"Well this is a weird little rant but I totally know it..I like the simple language and all out honesty of it... Good read...Vag" -
05 Tue
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02 SatReceived a critique
on Under The Never Sky from @emogothgirl
"damn. i really like this. i am a sucker for your style man, you struck a chord in me. my only critique is the exclamations at the end; it seemed to break up the tremendous flow you had going. but beautiful! always, mag" -
01 FriReceived a critique
on Under The Never Sky from @weirdelf
"The line that really grabbed me was I will never drop you from my talons perhaps that theme could be developed for more impact. Supping from un-adultrated energy [did you mean un adult rated (parental guidance recommend…" -
01 FriCritiqued
"Sans Titre No. 2" by @Beauregard
"WOW I feel it...the pain...my kind of poem...I really like and appreciate" -
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- May 2012
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29 Tue
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29 TueCritiqued
"Angel Beneath the Trees" by @phxdreams
"You caused the tree to weep in sympathy, with its leaves, to graze upon your skin. Loved it...FREE VERSE!!!!!!!" -
29 TueCritiqued
"Alzheimer's" by @phxdreams
"Well I'm a free writer and I loved it... My dad is in last stage alzheimers and this brought me to tears .. The form was fine for the write it was but i didnt like the fold told rhyme i liked How long will the memories…" -
28 MonReceived a critique
on Book Of Pain (Part One ) from @Ian.T
"A complex write of feelings and ends of time where Dragons even fear to go, can't really keep all the words as a complete story in one place, there needs to be a few breaks to breathe...when there is no-one to blame. th…" -
28 Mon
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23 WedCritiqued
" Autumn Walk" by @Bryan
"dead birch stands out among red gold and orange old ghost I really like this section...flows off the tounge Good work...." -
23 WedFirst critique offered
on " Autumn Walk" by @Bryan
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22 TueFirst publication
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22 Tue
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22 TueJoined Neopoet
Membership begins
First poem published 1 days later.
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