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serena
Member since August 7, 2026
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Life’s cycle
A tree has grown
Now it has its own crown
The birds are happy, they have a house
In the ground, there is a mouse
The birds didn’t want to leave
And the tree started to grieve
He wanted its crown back
But it started to crack
The leaves were falling
It’s roots were dying
It was not autumn
But the tree reached its bottom
The animals left after this,
Everything was amiss
No one is clever
Nothing is forever
serena’s timeline
- August 2026
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08 Sat
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07 FriCritiqued
"Bear With One Ear" by @W. Barrett Munn
"I loved how you explained this. I would’ve put “and I wish my bear were here. Hugs don't feel as good with two ears.” As the last part of your poem." -
07 FriReceived a critique
on The fire in my heart from @Arkansas
"When I was born A light (er) went on - light is better. My heart was on fire, Full of desire At some point it flopped -swap flopped and stopped (Very nearly) stopped -later you state it got slower! My heart was (in) a g…" -
07 FriCritiqued
"Fading out of Myself" by @BlueSkies
"There are many physical details, I would’ve like to see more emotions. I don’t dislike what you wrote but it lacks the emotional part." -
07 FriCritiqued
"Possibilities" by @Andrea
"I feel like the overall message was clear but there are too many “it’s possible”. I also think things are too repetitive. I liked the last two lines." -
07 FriFirst critique offered
on "Possibilities" by @Andrea
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07 FriFirst publication
The fire in my heart
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07 FriJoined Neopoet
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