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Member since April 7, 2014
Member for 12 years, 1 month
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That laughing lines
They sculpturing your face that
grows with the years and all
on its time knowing there
have no control ,
Creams are smeared,but still
get wrinkles moored , just my
frame of mind to live through
the positive experience and
to settle .
As they said inevitable sign of
aging that establishes however,
after all of real beauty never lost ,
Is not this special? of crow's feet .
Seeker’s timeline
- April 2024
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10 years of membership
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- April 2015
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07 TueAnniversary
One year of membership
- April 2014
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10 ThuReceived a critique
on The Redoubtable Fighter from @themoonman
"Ok, when I said less is more I meant it but you've cut this down so much you've almost lost the image. What I really meant was to take some unnecessary wording out, no need in describing something and then telling them…" -
10 ThuReceived a critique
on That laughing lines from @Ian.T
"The arrangement of words is something you have to work on, Your themes will become better and where you use new ones we have not thought of. I have played as I sometimes do just to give you a small rearrangement to show…" -
10 ThuReceived a critique
on That laughing lines from @loved
"I know nothing about poetry but have composed since decades .... I am still learning but wonder why on some sites 1000 views I get daily are they all encouraging me ?? I wonder stlll" -
09 Wed
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08 Tue
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08 TueFirst critique offered
on "A Heart's Tale" by @alidzain
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07 MonFirst publication
Beautiful Weather
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07 Mon
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07 MonJoined Neopoet
Membership begins
First poem published 1 days later.
About Me
About me
My name is Pattra I'm a amateur writer , I write my poems without knowing about poetic structure or forms ., enjoy just letting the mind and pen do the work ,I like to write and learn feel free to Give honest feedback on my work it help improve my insparation .
The roots of whole being
decision you make that is
cheerful by ..
My Sincere ,The Seeker ..
Location: Netherland
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