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Member since April 7, 2014
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That laughing lines
They sculpturing your face that
grows with the years and all
on its time knowing there
have no control ,
Creams are smeared,but still
get wrinkles moored , just my
frame of mind to live through
the positive experience and
to settle .
As they said inevitable sign of
aging that establishes however,
after all of real beauty never lost ,
Is not this special? of crow's feet .
Seeker’s timeline
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One year of membership
- April 2014
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10 ThuReceived a critique
on The Redoubtable Fighter from @themoonman
"Ok, when I said less is more I meant it but you've cut this down so much you've almost lost the image. What I really meant was to take some unnecessary wording out, no need in describing something and then telling them…" -
10 ThuReceived a critique
on That laughing lines from @Ian.T
"The arrangement of words is something you have to work on, Your themes will become better and where you use new ones we have not thought of. I have played as I sometimes do just to give you a small rearrangement to show…" -
10 ThuNew follower
@loved
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10 ThuReceived a critique
on That laughing lines from @loved
"I know nothing about poetry but have composed since decades .... I am still learning but wonder why on some sites 1000 views I get daily are they all encouraging me ?? I wonder stlll" -
09 WedReceived a critique
on The Redoubtable Fighter from @raj
"I am sure your English will improve leaps and bounds with the same "spirit" which this poem of yours is about. Reading more will also improvise your vocabulary and construction. Your attempt and choice of theme is appea…" -
09 WedReceived a critique
on That laughing lines from @raj
"You have attempted a good poem to touch upon the subject of aging and in doing so emphasized that real beauty is never lost and even the crow's feet around the eyes when one smiles looks cute. I am sure you would be twe…" -
09 WedCritiqued
"Nascent Dream" by @raj
"Nice one i like of the imagery that you describe various sensations of pressure , it like a tango dance is passionate and sensual .Thank you for sharing My best regards" -
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09 WedCritiqued
"Twisted senses" by @themoonman
"Enjoyed your poem it nice to remember or feel of the love one ,i don't really have experience to critic of the poem but like the whole poem. My best regards" -
08 TueReceived a critique
on Beautiful Weather from @raj
"Welcome to Neopet. I am sure that while you soak in the stream of poems here you are very likely to seek what you have looked for while signing up as a Member of Neopoet. I learn from your profile that you are from Neth…" -
08 TueReceived a critique
on Beautiful Weather from @alidzain
"At least you have vivid imagery there, which is what I was lacking when I first joined Neopoet. Keep on writing. Alid" -
08 TueReceived a critique
on The Redoubtable Fighter from @themoonman
"Because content is subjective, I love it but I'm a huge fan of MMA. The title is good, did bring me in but thought it could be better. The word "confidence" is used wrong, should be "confident" the way the sentence is s…" -
08 TueCritiqued
"Hurt" by @Race_9togo
"Beautifully recognizable written sometimes it is difficult to accept Thank you for sharing Beste regards Pattra" -
08 Tue
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08 TueCritiqued
"Welcome In" by @Ian.T
"Very nice poem of a treasure of or delve into . Best regards Pattra" -
08 TueCritiqued
"A Heart's Tale" by @alidzain
"Your poem is beautiful mixed with a sadness , very clear and substantive poem . Best regards Pattra" -
08 TueFirst critique offered
on "A Heart's Tale" by @alidzain
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07 MonFirst publication
Beautiful Weather
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07 Mon
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07 MonJoined Neopoet
Membership begins
First poem published 1 days later.
About Me
About me
My name is Pattra I'm a amateur writer , I write my poems without knowing about poetic structure or forms ., enjoy just letting the mind and pen do the work ,I like to write and learn feel free to Give honest feedback on my work it help improve my insparation .
The roots of whole being
decision you make that is
cheerful by ..
My Sincere ,The Seeker ..
Location: Netherland
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