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A curate in the vipers nest.
Holy clemency some vague notion
a testimony of deliberate reverence
Poking holes in the futures conclusions
Bowed heads only see the ground
On a Lake of fire in a extraordinary craft
The leper tied to the mast
Fanned by a reluctant wind
Cooled by the beat of a angels wing .
Dispondency and advocacy
The twin pillars of shinar
a bridge between heaven and earth
johns revelations are a insane dream.
the viper senses its prey
at the foot of Jacobs ladder
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all the prophets gather at sinai
to welcome in the new dawn
Does Jesus teach us how to hate.(Luke 14 :26)
How did Judas die ?
Hanging on a tree full of remorse (Acts 1:18-19)
With his silver disguarded on the temple floor
Or does he explode on his field of blood
Purchased with the funds of betrayal ( Matthew 27 :3-10)
How do you reconcile the contridictions
Is the bibles errancy a misdirection ?
Maybe the word of God
Is just words of men
Disguised as holy men , priests .
Power and wealth disguised as faith
A engine of control
Fear drives the wheels that steer the craft
Contortions of the true meaning
A priest in a palace is no priest at all
Does the tribe of levi really heed the call
What is the end you seek
To turn the strong weak
To make the infidels rejoice in your vision
And be at peace with your belligerent position.
S.E.A’s timeline
- August 2026
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15 SatReceived a critique
on A curate in the vipers nest. from @Geezer
"not wondered at the validity of the "Scriptures"? I think that there is powerful evidence of truth in most of the "bibles of the world." What we may never discover; is how much of religious writings are the words of 'Go…" -
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09 SunNew follower
@Tink
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09 SunReceived a critique
on The Bad poet. from @Tink
"Welcome to Neopoet! Thank you for posting your first piece with us! Very well done!! While there are some flow issues, but as Geezer said, I'm not sure how to adjust them. If I could suggest for you to read it out loud…" -
08 SatReceived a critique
on The Bad poet. from @Geezer
"There is no better way to show bitterness, than to say:" I'll paint over the flowers, let loose the dark!" A single bold statement. I don't know how to fix it line by line and don't think that is what you want. I think…" -
08 SatFirst publication
The Bad poet.
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