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sarahatthesea
Member since July 25, 2016
Member for 9 years, 10 months
thoughts- on aging
on aging
Bifocal glasses- on once sparkling eyes
My past the point waist
Requires a large size
Aging triceps flap in the wind
I am reminded of this when I wave at a friend
Pendulous breasts - men see as a tease
No longer do they defy gravity
Rogue hairs grow randomly
on my chin like weeds
And sweat on my forehead erupts in beads
I am a scarred warrior of 'what has been'
My arsenal- spray tan and anti-aging cream
Relief! Reprieve from battle - at the end of my day
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in dreams, my brain will have its way
And give me furlough in the night
A little encouragement for the fight
free to dream .....
And fantasize ....
that I am beautiful
and young again.
sarahatthesea’s timeline
- July 2021
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25 SunAnniversary
5 years of membership
- July 2017
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25 TueAnniversary
One year of membership
- September 2016
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16 FriFirst critique offered
on "If Tomorrow Never Comes" by @alidzain
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06 TueReceived a critique
on thoughts- on aging from @Esker
"At this age we are collectables...ptsd is real...not fun relationships are somewhat complicated complex and brutal simple......I know people..men and women that just have parents....and I read now that many male ..femal…" -
01 ThuReceived a critique
on thoughts- on aging from @Esker
"its hard too be a writer at fourteen its easy to model at this age and that blurry line too eighteen when U can vote..when the state gives a shit....eighteen then you Pay taxes....fight for your country drive a car and…" - August 2016
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31 WedReceived a critique
on thoughts- on aging from @jane210660
"Why would you want to be young again? I use a few moisturisers etc to stop me crinkling to the point of being totally unrecognisable, but there is a lot to be said for growing old disgracefully. Not much point on dwelli…" -
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- July 2016
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31 Sun
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25 MonFirst publication
the cost of Freedom
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25 MonJoined Neopoet
Membership begins
First poem published 1 days later.
About Me
just another old woman with romantic fantasies
Location: southern gulf coast, USA
Oriah Mountain Dreamer
Recent Work
thoughts- on aging
a scottish love song
(more) thoughts on aging
on aging
the cost of Freedom
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