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Salmerhsambo
Member since November 29, 2019
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Depression
I breath with faze,
moving my feeble soul around
making me fidgety.
Fumbling every time my mouth move,
My words turning equivocal.
My face is dark with rage,
Laying my head on my pillow at night
and the hurricane in it lits up.
Hoping to eradicate my tears,
Wearing my smiling mask,
Bunging my legs on the floor
asking how does happiness taste,
A conundrum question.
Raising my hands to sky
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hoping to pray.
Invisible tears flowing like river.
But I keep fighting to stay alive.
Every conversation is insipid,
Infusing happiness trying to fight my depression.
I keep fighting because my instinct never lie.
I will win this war,
I am a winner!!!
Salmerhsambo’s timeline
- November 2024
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29 FriAnniversary
5 years of membership
- November 2020
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29 SunAnniversary
One year of membership
- December 2019
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06 FriReceived a critique
on Depression from @Edna Sweetlove
"This has quite a number of basic grammatical errors. I suggest you proof-read it." -
03 TueReceived a critique
on Depression from @vandiemenspeak
"This is relatable. I can understand the idea of raising hands in a half formed prayer, and the knowledge of invisible tears. A true epidemic of our time. One possible positive though... a lot of great poets were sufferi…" -
03 TueFirst publication
Depression
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03 Tue
- November 2019
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29 FriJoined Neopoet
Membership begins
First poem published 4 days later.
About Me
About me
I write with quill. I'm easy going person and always ready to learn new things.
Location: Kano, Nigeria
Favorite Poets
I got inspired by IN-Q
whose writing is out of this world. He is incredibly a genius which I always look back to him when I get stuck. And Clayton Jennings have been my mentor for a long time. This writings are deeply from his heart.
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