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riot llane
Member since February 18, 2022
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A Little Bit
Wanting to move on,
But don’t want to forget.
Need to loosen the grip,
But if I do,
Will it be too loose,
That you’ll slip away?
I shall make a little box,
And fill it full of you,
I’ll tie it tightly shut,
And put it away,
For just a little bit.
And though I love you so,
I need to move on,
Because I need to make new memories,
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And live my life again.
But when the time comes,
And I need to feel your comfort,
I shall pull box out,
Open it up,
And look deep in my heart,
I shall remember again,
But only for a little bit.
So with these last words,
I shall move on,
Though know I’ll always love you,
I just need to let go.
But only for a little bit.
riot llane’s timeline
- February 2023
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18 SatAnniversary
One year of membership
- February 2022
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25 FriReceived a critique
on A Little Bit from @Ray Whitaker
""Pull your box out" nice analogy for putting having placed something away for a later examination. Unrequited love piece, very full of emotion and angst. I'm looking forward to seeing/reading more of your work!" -
19 SatReceived a critique
on A Little Bit from @Geezer
"to let go and what to hang on to, is always a problem. I understand the writer's predicament, as I have been there myself. Not an easy subject but handled well. The terseness of the lines, make me think of wanting to es…" -
18 FriFirst publication
A Little Bit
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18 FriJoined Neopoet
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I am 18 and from Kentucky.
Location: TENNESSEE
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