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readwritelive
Member since October 30, 2010
Member for 15 years, 7 months
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To whom it may concern
It seems like everything I do goes unnoticed
Work my fingers to the bone and nobody knows it
I'm not asking for thank you cards and roses
but if my work ethic shifted from where it is to far below it
just think where you would be and then verbally show it
But there's no chance for that, you're too self absorbed to see my focus
I see that you'll probably frown when you know why I wrote this
Consider this my two week notice.
readwritelive’s timeline
- October 2025
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30 ThuAnniversary
15 years of membership
- October 2020
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30 FriAnniversary
10 years of membership
- November 2017
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17 FriReceived a critique
on Aristocratic Articulation from @Eumolpus
"and filled with rage. I have rage. we all have rage. You are telling us first: An economy ruined,our currency is burning we are at war with the world and the son of God is returning so we are immediately see the apocaly…" -
17 FriReceived a critique
on A lifes work rebirth from @Eumolpus
"How often by fate of war or nature people have lost and and till today lose some or all their life's work- flood, fire, earthquake, you name it. This is a good poem about that. Make us feel that profound loss. I wasn't…" - October 2015
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30 FriAnniversary
5 years of membership
- January 2013
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20 Sun
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- December 2012
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24 Mon
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20 ThuReceived a critique
on My love from @scribbler
"I liked the emotive quality. Were it me, I'd break this into about 3 stanzas, say "my love" instead of "hey love" and isolate goodbye in its own last line for increased impact.......just a few ideas.........stan" - October 2012
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03 WedReceived a critique
on Aristocratic Articulation from @Esker
"disheveled and hurting but so it is ....thank You.." -
03 WedReceived a critique
on Aristocratic Articulation from @Ian.T
"Your poem reminded me of the old saying about the eye of a Needle. And an Old saying attributed to Jesus long ago, but never proven.. It is easier for a camel to go through the eye of a needle, than for a rich man to en…" - March 2012
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- October 2011
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30 SunAnniversary
One year of membership
- August 2011
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19 Fri
- May 2011
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- April 2011
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28 Thu
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26 Tue
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25 MonFirst publication
A lifes work rebirth
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25 Mon
- October 2010
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30 SatJoined Neopoet
Membership begins
First poem published 177 days later.
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