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Ray Miller
Member since July 29, 2016
Member for 9 years, 11 months
Calculations
The siren of one ambulance
can destroy Samaritan attitudes
in a whole Chilean town,
according to Ivan Illich.
He could see where Illich was coming from
and wanted to be there too.
He was a passenger and knew next to nothing
of cars except sit tight and hold on around corners.
He was musing upon the perfection of maps
and measuring progress in inches and hours
when a swerve to miss a reckless cat
sent calculations flying off
at improbable angles.
He heard the ring of a thousand bells
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and dreamt the longest kiss of his life.
He wondered which Chilean town was that
or did the contention hold good for all?
Had Ivan Illich witnessed
a general shrugging of the shoulders?
Did the lapsed Samaritans cross to the other side
of the road more carefully than that cat?
Such questions made him dizzy and sick,
then he recalled Illich had
also said something like this:
If you add the time spent working to earn
the money to buy the automobile
to the time spent in the automobile
(including the traffic jams, of course)
to the time spent in the hospital
that followed the automobile crash
to the time spent discovering oil
to fuel every automobile
and divide it into the number of miles
driven in a single year
then the speed of each automobile
is just 3.7 miles per hour.
A light shone in his eyes
and people asked his name.
At this rate he would never reach South America.
Ray Miller’s timeline
- July 2026
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15 Wed
- April 2026
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13 MonReceived a critique
on Bruce tells it slant from @Geezer
"something in me. I could make a very good case for a permanent solution to Bruce's problem. Uh, yeah... I would have stretched this out just little more. Nicley treated, don't ever finish the story. You could make the t…" -
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10 FriReceived a critique
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09 ThuReceived a critique
on Brown Study from @Lavender
"Hello, Ray, My interpretation takes me to the thoughts of a housewife back in the 50s. I am curious... Thank you! L" - January 2025
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15 WedHighest posting month
January 2025 — 11 poems
- November 2024
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28 ThuFirst publication
A Clockwise Direction
- February 2022
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18 FriFirst critique offered
on "REGRET" by @scribbler
- July 2021
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29 ThuAnniversary
5 years of membership
- July 2017
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29 SatAnniversary
One year of membership
- July 2016
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29 FriJoined Neopoet
Membership begins
First poem published 3044 days later.
About Me
I'm a Socialist, Aston Villa supporter and faithful husband. Life's been a disappointment.
Location: England
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