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pointless_writer
Member since February 18, 2018
Member for 8 years, 3 months
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HAIR
She has long hair,
Her hair flows through the air,
Her hair shields her eyes,
So her emotions remain trapped inside,
He has short hair,
His hair just sits there,
It shows clearly his face,
His emotions are on display,
With all there beauty and grace,
She has no hair on her head,
She is bald instead,
But her emotions are still trapped inside,
Her feelings she tries to hind,
She's loosing her mind ...
and her life
pointless_writer’s timeline
- February 2023
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18 SatAnniversary
5 years of membership
- February 2019
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18 MonAnniversary
One year of membership
- July 2018
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04 WedNew follower
@hopeless_writer
- March 2018
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16 FriReceived a critique
on FAKE SMILE from @weirdelf
"I think fake smiles are easy to detect. Even if we don't consciously think 'that is a fake smile' we feel uncomfortable when we see one. People are very sensitive to unspoken communication through eyes and body language…" -
08 ThuReceived a critique
on HAIR from @scribbler
"God only made a few perfect heads. He hid the rest with hair lol. The last stanza is powerful in its statement of how little hair means compared to the true individual. BTW welcome to Neopoet....stan" -
08 Thu
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08 ThuReceived a critique
on HAIR from @swamp-witch
"I'm not going to call you by your full username, because no one is pointless, and I hope you will believe me about that. What a powerful concept. I think hair has held special meanings throughout history. My own journey…" - February 2018
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21 Wed
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19 MonReceived a critique
on FAKE SMILE from @Eumolpus
"Please be so kind as to scroll down on the homepage, you'll see a poem I just posted called "The Smile" I had a different take on these involuntary smiles we share, but mine was directed at the crowd, not people near to…" -
19 MonReceived a critique
on FAKE SMILE from @scribbler
"there are some changed I'd make had I written this but I didn't lol. However in Stanza 2 line1 "someone's" , stanza 2 line 2 "their" Stanza 2 line 4 "you're" , just a few grammaticals you can easily clean up........stan" -
19 Mon
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19 MonFirst critique offered
on "LESSONS" by @scribbler
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19 MonReceived a critique
on FAKE SMILE from @raj
"In recent times i have been hearing a lot being tweeted labelled Fake News..and here you have written a poem about Fake Smile. I believe you could have added something about benefits if any of a Fake Smile or what is ma…" -
18 SunFirst publication
FAKE SMILE
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18 SunJoined Neopoet
Membership begins
First poem published 1 days later.
About Me
About me
I am new to neopoet and have a passion of reading and writing. I am open to consrcutive critism and would like to hear the opinions of all kinds of people.
Location: Ireland
Favorite Poets
Sarah Kay
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Workshops
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| UNFINISHED WORKS | (syllabus) | Splash Pool | Started 2018-03-28 | Concluded |