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The Poetry Dude
Member since October 28, 2020
Member for 5 years, 7 months
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The Beach With No Sand
I look beyond the sun and turn to morn
I face towards the west - scorn and weltered
close is not far and yet....
the dream comes over and over
and brace -
and still I hope that there is peace
for tonight is moonlit daze
and promise is inevitable
can you see it, strong and holding
soft clouds against beautiful pictures
but wait - dawn has past and yet again....
I turn to the east and see it
more radiant and illuminous than ever
Catch that...solemn and vast
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my toes clasps to the shells
what is missing - a floor not soft
for clouds that shadow my dreams
and wishes upon given requests
sends fallen leaves and cherished souls
to become gathered in motion
am I wrong to walk on broken pastures
to want a feeling of security and just
to live without anguish that seeds
to honor the beach with no sand
The Poetry Dude’s timeline
- October 2025
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28 TueAnniversary
5 years of membership
- October 2021
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28 ThuAnniversary
One year of membership
- October 2020
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31 SatReceived a critique
on The Beach With No Sand from @Ray Whitaker
"Like the allegory too. I agree with Lovedly too." -
31 SatReceived a critique
on The Beach With No Sand from @Ray Whitaker
"Like the allegory too. I agree with Lovedly too." -
30 FriReceived a critique
on The Beach With No Sand from @lovedly
"compose shorter 12 to 19 lines poems and space them it gives one an appeal to read Take it as you will initially" -
30 FriFirst critique offered
on "Autumn woes " (since unpublished) by @Teddy15
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30 Fri
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29 Thu
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28 WedFirst publication
Mountains That Move
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28 Wed
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28 WedJoined Neopoet
Membership begins
First poem published 1 days later.
About Me
About me
I love writing poetry. That's about it.
Location: USA
Favorite Poets
Langston Hughes
Mya Angelo
Neo Richardson
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