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Pixee
Member since June 20, 2008
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Yesterday
The darkness overwhelms me.
I live in yesterday's world.
Each yesterday is darker than the
one before. Seeing a sad black
life crossing out the days on the
calendar, one at a time.
Looking back, I cannot see past
the black shadow that engulfs me.
My life is spent trying to retrieve
yesterday.....I realize that it will
never come to pass, backwards I'm
wanting to retrieve the yesterday.
I realize that it will never come
to pass.
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Life seems crushing the more I
try to continue. The weight on
my back is unbearable. No one is
there to comfort me. Peeking at
the calendar one last time, I
can stand the pressure of life
no longer.
I give up! My life is a tragedy, a
mistake. What I do best is venting
in the name of blood. After painting
my wrists scarlet I feel great relief,
and now I am ready for another
rusty day.
Pixee’s timeline
- June 2023
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19 MonAnniversary
15 years of membership
- June 2018
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19 TueAnniversary
10 years of membership
- June 2013
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19 WedAnniversary
5 years of membership
- April 2012
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09 MonNew follower
@Candlewitch
- May 2011
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24 TueReceived a critique
on Yesterday from @vexations10
"Not seen you around, hope you are doing better." -
08 SunCritiqued
"Daughter of Darkness " by @xena465
"I read and can understand you. i feel the same but don't know how to put it into words. I thank you for the words. You have every word in their proper place. I am depressed also. i do all I can to NOT be depressed but i…" -
08 SunCritiqued
"Footprints & more Footprints" by @yenti
"I truly enjoyed reading your poem. You have taken the poem "Foot Prints" to a much greater impact. Your poems are always well written and this one is no different. Thank you for the read. I enjoyed is sooo....Read you l…" -
08 SunCritiqued
"The Return of the King of the Gnomes" by @docmaverick
"I really enjoyed your story. I read it twice. Your story got my attention. A very well written story. WONDERFUL!! Pixee" -
08 SunCritiqued
"Imagination is power" by @shirley harrison
"I like what you have written and I like it a lot. Well, I guess I would dance with the devil only because I already am. I don't think any angel would let me sing with them. Great question. It will get people to think wh…" -
06 Fri
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06 FriReceived a critique
on Yesterday from @Hooded Stranger
"Psyve, fair point...but I don't feel the blade is rusty...but as sharp as hell. Rusty day just didn't work for me...but I do see where you're coming from. What do you think about the stanza I pulled out to be repeated t…" -
06 Fri
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06 FriReceived a critique
on Yesterday from @Hooded Stranger
"Dearest Pixee, First impressions are a sense of hoplessness compounded by the onslaught of a bitter depression. The top layer of this piece is a stark announcement to the reader of the anguish you fight on a daily basis…" -
06 FriCritiqued
"You Dirty Rat? " by @xena465
"I can understand your poem some what. I am short myself. I am only 4.9. I breathe in what others breathe out. I like this poem very much. It kinda hits home for me. Keep on keeping on my friend. Friends Always, Pixee" -
06 FriCritiqued
"Nothing" by @Hooded Stranger
"I guess everyone here writes about how they feel in poetry. This poem 'Yesterday' is my best poem I have written. I read it over and over again and I get the same response, this is exactly how I feel. I am in process of…" -
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05 ThuCritiqued
"Delicious!..." by @Geezer
"it goes. This is a wonderful and very well written. It hit the nail on the head with the first blow. This is a very strong poem, I know it came from the depths of your being. GREAT WRITE!!! Thank you for posting this. I…" -
05 ThuCritiqued
"Nothing" by @Hooded Stranger
"I read this one twice and both times made me feel what your poem speaks. I feel that way each and every day. I know what you are going thru. I needed this poem. I needed to see what I have been thinking a long time. Tha…" -
04 WedNew follower
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To All The Poets
"I appreciate you commenting on my poems. I just wanted to say that it is a bit hard for me to comment on everyone's poems. I don't have complete access to the internet. My cousin is going to college online. That takes up a lot of my time to respond to you all. I do get a break every now and then. It may be short lived, but I do my best to reply. Please except my apology. I will comment the best I can in the time frame I have open. Please" -
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19 FriAnniversary
One year of membership
- December 2008
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23 TueFirst critique offered
on "Proprietress of Crimson Hearts" by @Proprietress of Crimson Hearts
- June 2008
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22 SunFirst publication
The Razor's Edge
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19 ThuJoined Neopoet
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First poem published 3 days later.
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