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PETHEMPAMENTES
Member since September 29, 2016
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REINCARNATION
Twelve times I had come and
Stood on mountains of earth
First the Aries Warrior
Last the Pisces Dreamer and
Now as the observer of time
I had cursed my last departure
Into this cave of darkness
Why had I come this time?
This time was not for me
This I felt instinctively
This I knew subconsciously
As I looked I did not judge
As I touched I did not love
I felt insanity tear at my reality
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Twelve times I had witnessed being and
In being I rode the waves of time
First through erotic fantasies
Last through bleak obscurities and
Now with a third view tying beginnings
To endings I had cursed my last departure
Into this cave of --- treasures
Why I had come this time was
To serve the many --- and salvage any
Thing I may have left before
Systems I had not known before
As I feel age and time give
Certainty to my troubled mind
PETHEMPAMENTES’s timeline
- September 2021
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29 WedAnniversary
5 years of membership
- September 2017
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29 FriAnniversary
One year of membership
- October 2016
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04 TueReceived a critique
on REINCARNATION from @weirdelf
"and post it on Facebook and other social media. May I have your permission? If you would rather do the reading yourself I will send you the log-on to SoundCloud which links to Facebook." -
04 TueReceived a critique
on REINCARNATION from @weirdelf
"good stuff, insightful. This is what Neopoet is about." -
04 TueReceived a critique
on REINCARNATION from @weirdelf
"This is powerful, profound and beautifully written. It says a lot more than about your own journey. Just what poetry should be. My only suggestion is that 'subconsciously' might be better as 'unconsciously'. A tad less…" -
02 Sun
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02 SunFirst critique offered
on "Glass Castles or Sunday Suits..." by @Roscoe Lane
- September 2016
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30 FriFirst publication
BLACKNESS
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30 Fri
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29 ThuJoined Neopoet
Membership begins
First poem published 1 days later.
About Me
About me
Past Prophetes Temple Qebhsennuf Fresno, California [1970's]. Kemetic priest and Seventh Dawn Associate. Retired little old man.
Location: Western Mountain Time Zone, United States, USA
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