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PETHEMPAMENTES
Member since September 29, 2016
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REINCARNATION
Twelve times I had come and
Stood on mountains of earth
First the Aries Warrior
Last the Pisces Dreamer and
Now as the observer of time
I had cursed my last departure
Into this cave of darkness
Why had I come this time?
This time was not for me
This I felt instinctively
This I knew subconsciously
As I looked I did not judge
As I touched I did not love
I felt insanity tear at my reality
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Twelve times I had witnessed being and
In being I rode the waves of time
First through erotic fantasies
Last through bleak obscurities and
Now with a third view tying beginnings
To endings I had cursed my last departure
Into this cave of --- treasures
Why I had come this time was
To serve the many --- and salvage any
Thing I may have left before
Systems I had not known before
As I feel age and time give
Certainty to my troubled mind
PETHEMPAMENTES’s timeline
- September 2021
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29 WedAnniversary
5 years of membership
- September 2017
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29 FriAnniversary
One year of membership
- October 2016
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04 TueReceived a critique
on REINCARNATION from @weirdelf
"and post it on Facebook and other social media. May I have your permission? If you would rather do the reading yourself I will send you the log-on to SoundCloud which links to Facebook." -
04 TueReceived a critique
on REINCARNATION from @weirdelf
"good stuff, insightful. This is what Neopoet is about." -
04 TueReceived a critique
on REINCARNATION from @weirdelf
"This is powerful, profound and beautifully written. It says a lot more than about your own journey. Just what poetry should be. My only suggestion is that 'subconsciously' might be better as 'unconsciously'. A tad less…" -
02 SunReceived a critique
on REINCARNATION from @Esker
"and the way ur expression in verse and word use..association for me it does not even require paragraph breaks for its reads well without them! Was in the mountians years ago....across yellowstone territory....black hill…" -
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02 SunCritiqued
"Glass Castles or Sunday Suits..." by @Roscoe Lane
"Hi Roscoe, I'm enjoying this rhyme scheme you've placed together then, when I get to the fourth verse, I see this word "mines," and I'm wondering if it is a typing error or perhaps an attempt at politicizing a quasi-col…" -
02 SunFirst critique offered
on "Glass Castles or Sunday Suits..." by @Roscoe Lane
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01 SatReceived a critique
on BLACKNESS from @jane210660
"I really love this. I can identify with it 100% and am no stranger to the quiet hours that whirl between two worlds. I think you have caught a perfect snapshot and honestly wouldn't suggest any changes. Cheers Jx" - September 2016
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30 FriFirst publication
BLACKNESS
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29 ThuJoined Neopoet
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About me
Past Prophetes Temple Qebhsennuf Fresno, California [1970's]. Kemetic priest and Seventh Dawn Associate. Retired little old man.
Location: Western Mountain Time Zone, United States, USA
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