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patrysw3
Member since June 13, 2026
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Sometimes
Sometimes
What you face
Can make you
Exit the race
Sometimes
The Spirit to carry on
Is just gone
Sometimes
The place where you are
Is too far
Sometimes
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The journey back
is off
The beaten track
And sometimes
Only grace
Can keep you
In the race
Tonight
I pray
To be able
To stay
And tonight
If grace abound
I could be found
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patrysw3’s timeline
- June 2026
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15 MonNew follower
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15 MonReceived a critique
on Sometimes from @J-poe1234
"I like the concept, and some of your rhymes are really good, but some of them sound a bit forced as well. If you can't find a perfect rhyme, try to use a slant rhyme; it makes the poem flow better. (the ending and like…" -
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Sometimes
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About Me
About me
I am a South African, Social Entrepreneur and Peace-builder coming from 17 years in Journalism. Enjoy writing poetry, also as a form of Artistic Protest.
Location: ZAF
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