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Nyok Maker Mareng
Member since April 27, 2022
Member for 4 years, 1 month
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Valentine
Valentine
It is approaching
People are preparing
Some are still hustling
To make it to that evening
A eve worth remembering
Gifts bought are everlasting
To cite is their heartwarming
It is an eve of late snuggling
Couples play a pillow fighting
Voices are mute only soughing
Their promises are mind-blowing
They promise heavenly camping
© Nyok M. Mareng
Nyok Maker Mareng’s timeline
- February 2024
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04 SunReceived a critique
on Valentine from @Candlewitch
"Are you a new member? If so, welcome to Neopoet! I much enjoyed your poem. It happens four days before my birthday, lol, *hugs, Cat" -
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- April 2023
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27 ThuAnniversary
One year of membership
- June 2022
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24 FriReceived a critique
on DREAM WIFE from @Mr joghe
"Nice piece of writing! You have appreciated your dream wife with the choice of word. I believe she will smile when she read it. I like the whole stanza." -
24 FriReceived a critique
on When I saw her from @Candlewitch
"who just won jackpot (who just won (a) jackpot from series of loses (from (a) series of losses try these changes *hugs, Cat" -
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- May 2022
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20 FriReceived a critique
on When I saw her from @Candlewitch
"Scribbler gives good advice. you can't go wrong following it. *hugs, Cat" -
19 ThuReceived a critique
on When I saw her from @scribbler
"I reckon I can forgive you for being a socialist lol. Now a few changes to improve the English here : line 4 ; Change pierce to pierced line 5: change stop to stopped line 8: change merely to mere last line try just aft…" -
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15 SunHighest posting month
May 2022 — 8 poems
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09 MonReceived a critique
on Mother's lap from @Geezer
"Cat has given you! She is very kind to the new people here on the site. Cat has made some valid points and you should waste no time in implementing the changes that she has suggested. Nothing I can add; but a very good…" -
09 MonReceived a critique
on Mother's lap from @Candlewitch
"in this line: When our strengths( is) getting finished change (is) to are in this line: It's the comfort zone that we dream(s) to live remove the "s" It's the (aspire) blanket of every living soul (remove aspire) When (…" -
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01 SunReceived a critique
on MY BELOVED SUITCASE from @Candlewitch
"I found your gentle humor refreshing. I liked these lines: Come hold my hand let go for adventure To explore and enjoy the love of nature With it all great and lovely physical feature That are beautify by the green past…" - April 2022
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27 WedFirst publication
MY BELOVED SUITCASE
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27 Wed
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27 WedJoined Neopoet
Membership begins
First poem published 1 days later.
About Me
About me
SOCIALIST// INFLUENCER//INSPIRER// POET//MENTOR//HUNANIST// ADVOCATOR//SOCIOLOGIST//
Location: South Sudan, SDN
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