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May 19, 2012
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The Poet Man --updated
THE POET MAN
Once I was a poet man.
I wrote in minor key
the melodies
my soul would sing to me.
But now the voices are stil
and silence falls heavy
where all will is gone.
I've said it all and some.
It is done.
No longer cliché
of the day....
I don’t hear the music
play
anymore.
— Geremia, May 19, 2012
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Esker
14 years 2 months ago
some changes
"but now its voice has grown still
and silence is the quiet will
that plays its song of charm to me"
Like this one a lot
my freind
Thank You!
Geremia
14 years 2 months ago
I like your rendition better.
I like your rendition better.
thanks, Steven.
Nordic cloud
14 years 2 months ago
A lovely birdsong for today,
A lovely birdsong for today,
but the bird will sing again another day.
Just you see.
Anni
Geremia
14 years 2 months ago
:)
:)
loved
14 years 1 month ago
Smiles
I admire the legacy you still want to leave behind
GOD BLESS
Geremia
14 years 1 month ago
Yes, we all need to leave our
Yes, we all need to leave our mark that says, "I've been here."
loved
14 years 1 month ago
YES and say
man walks this way but once only ..
why????
ask your gods>>>
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