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The Poet Man --updated

THE POET MAN

Once I was a poet man.
I wrote in minor key
the melodies
my soul would sing to me.

But now the voices are stil
and silence falls heavy
where all will is gone.

I've said it all and some.
It is done.
No longer cliché
of the day....

I don’t hear the music
play
anymore.

— Geremia, May 19, 2012

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Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

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Country/Region: USA

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Esker

Esker

14 years ago

some changes

"but now its voice has grown still
and silence is the quiet will
that plays its song of charm to me"

Like this one a lot
my freind

Thank You!

loved

loved

14 years ago

Smiles

I admire the legacy you still want to leave behind
GOD BLESS

loved

loved

14 years ago

YES and say

man walks this way but once only ..
why????
ask your gods>>>