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Apr 22, 2012
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THE TIN MAN
THE TIN MAN
If I had a heart
it would bleed
for losing you.
If I had a soul
it would die
for missing you.
And if this heart and soul
could speak
they would tell you
that I did love you.
— Geremia, Apr 22, 2012
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Nordic cloud
14 years 3 months ago
I immediately thought of The
I immediately thought of The Wizard of Oz, but I see it isn't he.
This is beautifully put Joe, and so subtle tooooo.
Anni
Geremia
14 years 3 months ago
Takk :)
Takk :)
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