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Metaphorical poetry what’s that?

Metaphorical poetry what’s that???

I must read you
A million times
To learn the nuances
Of metaphorical poetry….

 

Someone once asked me
Why I didn’t take shelter
Under the umbrella of metaphors

 

I queried,
Yes umbrella I know,
What’s a metaphor for?

 

They laughed at my stupendous folly
But the reverberating laughter
Tells me till today
Siren,
We poets can never throw 
Metaphors away
Without that poetry is lifeless
If you permit me
To say,
To say
To say

 


I am still LOVED anyway

— loved, Jul 19, 2010

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weirdelf

weirdelf

15 years 10 months ago

write a poem

without metaphor, simile, adjective or adverb. That's a challenge. Once again I say, loved, I have been harsh with you, but you don't think about what you say. I also think you are a liar when you say 10000 people love you, you are self-obsessed. Take the challenge. Cheers, Jess, Praise helps no poet, have the courage and generousity to give critique.
weirdelf

weirdelf

15 years 10 months ago

Not that there is anything wrong with that,

but I also think you are a transgender person who has issues about it. Be yourself. You deserve to be. Cheers, Jess, Praise helps no poet, have the courage and generousity to give critique.