scribbler

Jul 18, 2010 ⭐ See this poem's read count — a supporter feature

SINS of the FLESH

I so love your skin's feel
   beneath my old rough fingers
   e'en after a caress I steal
   the memory still lingers

As touch moves on to gentle cleft
   I'm filled with anticipation
   of patience I am now bereft
   please fill my expectation

And each little roundish nub
   also begs attention
   calling out for a light rub
   and a poem's mention

Just the sight of your soft curves
    fills me with such delight
   and never, ever fails to serve
   to enrich my appetite

The taste of you upon my lips
   is beyond most others' reaches
   and now my secret finally slips
   I sure love eating peaches

— scribbler, Jul 18, 2010

About the Author

Region, Country: South Carolina, United States, USA

Favorite Poets: Frost, Burns, Longfellow, Poe, and Johnson. I guess you've noticed these are all past masters. Other than folks on site I don't read any contemporary poets .

Critiques

Marie-I-Be

16 years ago

Juicy!

Wow, you sure can churn'em out, Stan. You really had me going there! Today I ate a nectarine. Don't know if it compares!

scribbler

16 years ago

sins

Thank you Marie.So far my main problem ,other than inexperience,is finding a topic.I hope to be able to tell when quality drops off .I know that point is out there.When I find it ,may have to take a short break to recharge.I do appreciate your continued support and comments.........scribbler

faithmairee

16 years ago

Priceless

Need I say more? I just love it! You're staying strong, Stan. Love-Faith ~If you can't help someone atleast ways don't hurt them.~

scribbler

16 years ago

sins

Thank you faith.I hope some of my regular readers will alert me to a fall in quality if I don't notice it.Thanks for the visit.....Stan

Lil Z

16 years ago

Wow!

Perfect title, you threw me off completely, great write!

scribbler

16 years ago

LOL

I'm gonna get people so used to expecting a "twist"that I'll surprise them one day by not having one ha!ha! Thanks for coming by ....scribbler

magics02

16 years ago

You threw me for a loop again here

Stan your the man and I love how you twisted this one up and ended with the peach. Great creative mind you have sir. Loved it!! Left me a chuckle. Could title be maybe Sins of the Skins as flesh well I guess the peach skin could be the flesh, what do you think of that? Love at ya guy Mona Magics02 xoxo

scribbler

16 years ago

sins

GOTCHA! lol Glad to make you smile.As to title change,I think you know my reluctance to change a title.In all my submissions,I think I've done it once.But I do appreciate all your input.fondly......Stan

Loreli

16 years ago

Love it!

I laughed out loud at this! You definately got me! Lori

poewriter58

16 years ago

Stan

Ah but I almost expected this from you ,nicely penned my friend poewriter58 Special Events Director Come to our chat rooms and be rewarded

Lonnie

16 years ago

What a sly rascal you are!

And a real 'Peach' of a poet! I loved this one as much as your last, Stan, and I guess I'm becoming a fan! Keep 'em coming!

shirley harrison

16 years ago

"Peaches"

i was half expecting to read Salmon at the end! Dear Stan ever entertaining you are! Wonderful peach,i mean Piece! Theres a back log as i am never here at the weekend so will cruise today! Much love always shirl... shirley harrison

xena465

16 years ago

Very witty I love it

Fabulous Stan, Mmmm peaches. Haven’t I read this one before, perhaps you upgraded it? I've done this with a couple of my older poems, deleted them and then re-wrote them. Just one wee thing... I so love your {skin’s} feel ………………[skins] … I know you’re like me with the apostrophes, so I’m not 100% sure. PS. You never fall in quality, you just keep getting better and with all your new forms it proves just how great a writer you are Stan. Xena Quote: Science is what you know; philosophy is what you don't know. - Bertrand Russell

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