Spreading Her Wings

This is an exceptional poem, it was very well written and established. The language was fantastic: "She wears a face an angelic look only seeing such things in a book" and: "For an angels face so pure and true. She spread her wings and flew" That's superb writing! You have a couple tiny little tweaks, I'll put parentheses around them: "She wears a face(,) an angelic look (O)nly seeing such things in a book A feeling of peace surrounds her this day Night time comes, she still feels this way. For a longing of love sits by her side (T)o the lord she will confide. As she lays in bed, her love leaks. His prayer began to speak. For an angels face so pure and true. She spread her wings and flew. A feeling of peace as she kneels to prays The love in her heart forever to stay." Keep writing! Peace and love, Lil Z

Another great write from you ... fabulous. Just one other thing that I noticed ... on this line ... A feeling of peace as she kneels to {prays} ........[pray] Xena Quote: Science is what you know; philosophy is what you don't know. - Bertrand Russell