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Jul 18, 2010
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I'd Be Lost Without You.
On 'The Sea of Life'
Alone on the darkest night
No North Star shining
Alone on the darkest night
No North Star shining
— Mari Shine, Jul 18, 2010
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Candlewitch
16 years ago
Dear Mari
Kailashana
16 years ago
Truly.Light, Anna“There is
raskin
16 years ago
Eloquent simplicity. Lovely
faithmairee
16 years ago
Just Lovely
scribbler
16 years ago
what
Dennis Go
16 years ago
Simply splendid haiku! I
shirley harrison
16 years ago
"very strong"
xena465
16 years ago
Wow Marie
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