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Mari Shine
Jul 18, 2010 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

I'd Be Lost Without You.

On 'The Sea of Life'

Alone on the darkest night

No North Star shining
— Mari Shine, Jul 18, 2010

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faithmairee

faithmairee

15 years 10 months ago

Just Lovely

Very beautifully written, Mari! Love-Faith ~If you can't help someone atleast ways don't hurt them.~
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scribbler

15 years 10 months ago

what

a lovely compliment to lover in Haiku form.I noticed that without title poem's meaning is completely changed.Intentional?.......scribbler
Dennis Go

Dennis Go

15 years 10 months ago

Simply splendid haiku! I

Simply splendid haiku! I love how your title blends in with the whole piece giving it depth and more color!
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shirley harrison

15 years 10 months ago

"very strong"

Dear Mari, This is a splendid piece "Haiku" i really enjoy reading them and this one is really wonderful! much love shirley harrison
xena465

xena465

15 years 10 months ago

Wow Marie

Brilliant but a sad ending. Xena Quote: Science is what you know; philosophy is what you don't know. - Bertrand Russell