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Jul 18, 2010
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Auto Heart Repair
Truer words were never spoken,
purer motives never found;
I tried to heal a heart that's broken
from the hurt, in which 'twas bound.
Speaking simply, and directly
anyone can ease the binds;
that untangle, and set heartstrings, free
to relieve all troubled minds.
But, I've never had more troubles,
and as articulate, as I am;
I hate to burst your bubbles,
but, I couldn't speak worth a damn !
It was difficult to swallow
my big foot was in my mouth;
my train of thought, so hard to follow
that all logic soon went, south.
Public speaking done in private
is an art form I must, "hone";
because, I tried to mend a heart that
while still hurting.....'twas my own.
purer motives never found;
I tried to heal a heart that's broken
from the hurt, in which 'twas bound.
Speaking simply, and directly
anyone can ease the binds;
that untangle, and set heartstrings, free
to relieve all troubled minds.
But, I've never had more troubles,
and as articulate, as I am;
I hate to burst your bubbles,
but, I couldn't speak worth a damn !
It was difficult to swallow
my big foot was in my mouth;
my train of thought, so hard to follow
that all logic soon went, south.
Public speaking done in private
is an art form I must, "hone";
because, I tried to mend a heart that
while still hurting.....'twas my own.
— docmaverick, Jul 18, 2010
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Critiques
Australad
16 years ago
Mechanics
docmaverick
16 years ago
I appreciate....
raskin
16 years ago
I like your title and of
docmaverick
16 years ago
Raskin....
scribbler
16 years ago
repair
docmaverick
16 years ago
Always scribbling....
Antoinette Mar…
16 years ago
Beautifully written...and with saying...difficult to .....
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