loved

Jul 18, 2010 ⭐ See this poem's read count — a supporter feature

Your Poetic love

Your Poetic love

You are that fountain of love

beneath which

many a loving pair,

shall vow their love to you
and
shall say
wow,wow,and yet another wow

and
upon thy lips

would love their name

in poetic lure,
you can adore
the same

love, love, and love again
as the pair would wont
to share with you
theirs

— loved, Jul 18, 2010

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Critiques

xena465

16 years ago

Dear Loved

A WoW of a poetic love poem. Smashing stuff. Xena Quote: Science is what you know; philosophy is what you don't know. - Bertrand Russell

loved

16 years ago

u r

my wow some how whenever you say wow i like to bow thanks wowowowowowow

Lil Z

16 years ago

Another beautiful write loved!

You take grace and style to a whole different level loved, this was superb!

loved

16 years ago

know the value and are able to discern superiority in one's mind to those to whom it does concern, that you love my level does me laurels earn and let other's hearts burn if at all say it for times three, but a million thanks to thee by loved lovely

weirdelf

16 years ago

Loved, I have been harsh with you,

but I applaud you for using Neopoet to improve your poetry. You used to give meaningless comments and indulge your "ego cancer". You still claim 10000 people love you, but we are all insane and deluded, so I forgive this pecadillo. You have done well Cheers, Jess, Praise helps no poet, have the courage and generousity to give critique.

loved

16 years ago

i am

only being funny i only want my ego to die slowly albeit ere I may die first never mind as i am an illerate zero is a simple format nothing more no less i 'm no hypocrite but thanks.... thanks...AND thanks

loved

16 years ago

That you do

take the trouble to applaud my Sir, Neopoet has you as its Lord and can I ever dare to annoy a Lord? no, that I can't afford, no my Lord no my Lord no my Lord I still bow to thee for so elevating me, Thanks to thee thanks to thee thanks to thee Still the same Lovedly Lovely

faithmairee

16 years ago

I Like It

It's very nice, loved. I think "wont" (third line from the bottom) was meant to be want. Am I right? Lovely poem, loved. Love-Faith ~If you can't help someone atleast ways don't hurt them.~

loved

16 years ago

I think

if you rethink wont, is okay it has an exceptional meaning However i use it very rarely so thanks to thee for pointing it out to me you are do so free.

shirley harrison

16 years ago

OOOOOH LOved

I do I do Love Theeee! amazing poetry of looooove ! yours forever shirl... i will be back tomorrow to catch up on all that i have missed this weekend! shirley harrison

loved

16 years ago

Thou art the boldest

lover this side of Suez, thou shall be the victim for this praise, If thy boyfriend does eyebrows raise, kindly do limit thy phrase, err it does me from the environs of Neopoet mistakenly erase . But nonetheless I love to be pampered who wouldn't? LOVEDLY LOVELY NAUGHTY AS USUAL

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