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Jul 17, 2010
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THE HUNTER
Patience born of time afield
Knowledge gained by long experience
Stealth brought about from endless practice
Garbed in dark to hide in shadows
Little escapes his steely eyes
as the hunter tracks his prey
He picks.......and chooses
at his leisure
Quarry ,often unsuspecting
unaware of perhaps being passed over
in favor of another mark
whose end is
sudden
Matters not to hunter
is prey aware of his presence
or not
Same outcome
Same loss
Same sudden lurch between living
and dead
The slow inexorable stalk
the long stretches of silence
and waiting
and watching
and deciding
Now ? or Later ?
this one or that one ?
Swift cold-blooded decisiveness
With inevitable result
I am the quarry Death the hunter
and eventual victor
But not today
Knowledge gained by long experience
Stealth brought about from endless practice
Garbed in dark to hide in shadows
Little escapes his steely eyes
as the hunter tracks his prey
He picks.......and chooses
at his leisure
Quarry ,often unsuspecting
unaware of perhaps being passed over
in favor of another mark
whose end is
sudden
Matters not to hunter
is prey aware of his presence
or not
Same outcome
Same loss
Same sudden lurch between living
and dead
The slow inexorable stalk
the long stretches of silence
and waiting
and watching
and deciding
Now ? or Later ?
this one or that one ?
Swift cold-blooded decisiveness
With inevitable result
I am the quarry Death the hunter
and eventual victor
But not today
— scribbler, Jul 17, 2010
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Critiques
Lil Z
15 years 10 months ago
Very good!
scribbler
15 years 10 months ago
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lou
15 years 10 months ago
Stan
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15 years 10 months ago
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Marie-I-Be
15 years 10 months ago
Thank you ...
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15 years 10 months ago
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brittle light
15 years 10 months ago
Hi Stan This piece held my
scribbler
15 years 10 months ago
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faithmairee
15 years 10 months ago
This Is Brlliant
scribbler
15 years 10 months ago
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xena465
15 years 10 months ago
Smashing stuff
scribbler
15 years 10 months ago
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weirdelf
15 years 10 months ago
your subtext is extemely suspicious,
scribbler
15 years 10 months ago
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weirdelf
15 years 10 months ago
[smiles] a paranoid is a man with all the facts- Bukowski
Seren
15 years 10 months ago
Dear Stan
scribbler
15 years 10 months ago
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Professor Purple
15 years 10 months ago
Wow!
scribbler
15 years 10 months ago
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shirley harrison
15 years 10 months ago
The Hunter!