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I Got IT!

A Poem of Religious Humor

I may not be the finest of the finest,
but I still got IT
I may not have the bling or swaggard,
but I still got IT

IT been around for a while
ever since Adam said to Eve in the first poem
ever to be spoken

    "You are bone of my bone
    flesh of my flesh
    you are my! woman
    because from me you were taken"
    Genesis 2:23

Then God say to Adam
    "Leave me! your father and mother
    Keep your woman and become one flesh"
    Genesis 2:24

I am a woman taken from a man
and still got IT

— Barbara Writes, Jul 17, 2010

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Region, Country: United States, USA

Favorite Poets: Billy Collins, Shakespeare, , Emily Dickinson, , , Whitman, Jess Tapper

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poewriter58

15 years 10 months ago

Hi Barbarafirst lineperhaps

Hi Barbara first line perhaps the finest of the fine could work here swaggard did you mean swagger? ok most of your poem consists of quotes. Barb this is not your usual work what happened May I suggest you put more of yourself into this work? poewriter58 Special Events Director Come to our chat rooms and be rewarded