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All I Think About Is You

                   All I Think About Is You 


      Tis the wee hours..the dark of night

              I long to hold you near

      But this night like many others..

              I'm alone with just my fears

      Fears and insecurities

              doubts and questions too

      But I cannot find the answers

              all I think about is you


      Yes I'm here without you

              but you never leave my mind

      I am so consumed by you

              cut me...your blood they'd find

      I don't know how this happened

              how we ever got this far

      But I find myself in forever dreams 

              as I gaze off to the stars


      I've done my share of crying..

              I've had many a laugh..

      I don't know what the future holds

              and the past remains the past

      Here and now our lives are fated

              and there's nothing we can do

      And you know I have no answers.....

              all I think about is you.




http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rguhxKEBlr4
      
for Patrick, of course

— jetz, Jul 17, 2010

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Region, Country: South eastern Connecticut, USA

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scribbler

15 years 10 months ago

you

WHAT!?! no comments yet on this heartfelt well written work.Hmmmmm.I must be only one with intact finger lol only change I'd make is change "fears" to fear....scribbler
LZ

Lil Z

15 years 10 months ago

Beautiful piece!

Scribbler's right, this was very impressive, and there's amazing depth in it, a superb write!
weirdelf

weirdelf

15 years 10 months ago

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Cheers, Jess, Praise helps no poet, have the courage and generousity to give critique.