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Jul 17, 2010
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Creature of the Night
You begin to shine at sunset
After the night falls
Your mind is kindled with light
Fingertips aflame
Live through the feeling through
Anger and Love
Elevate awareness
Of what had been
Try and fall away from it all
Fail, but try again and again
Breathing the fire
Until you burn out
And the morning sun
Closes your eyes
— mark, Jul 17, 2010
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faithmairee
16 years ago
Very Profound
Candlewitch
16 years ago
Dear Mark
shirley harrison
16 years ago
Dear Mark,I actually felt
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