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T A S T E


ribbons of flavour
in the hot spice
succour
like salt

Words you stare into me
we speak
I see now
how carefully you
look

and i dart away
taking everything
in around
trying to not miss
patterns
systems

instead
the taste of your
touch so close
filters through
representation

gives me examination

You are here
we close
for the moment
and the short
moments My eyes
fall into yours
before winging
away like a hunting
bird

My eyes see your
colours
your expressions flow
in memory clips

there is so much
written
the ease
the tension
the readiness
as you wait
the hesitation

Im taking you all in
you are too much
at once
and i would fall
fall like a falling
bird
without lift

but if I could
I would stare
with you when
talking
hold your gaze
so strong
so beautiful
so intent

I would be infatuated
with your eyes
and how they
soften
the colours like
no other
the design so
unique

the shape of your
jawline and your
mouth
with a hundred dreams
speaking
sculpted by the great
creator

and when I bore you
(on purpose)
you look away to the
window and let
the light fill them
and I can look upon
you hungering
I could sketch the
way the light falls
on you

your hair
the long throat
the bones beneath
the flesh just so

I sip my coffee
appear
nonchalant
but I am so alive

my soul sings
to be so near

I want to sit alone
next time
stretch out my legs
hide behind the
sunglasses

in this light
I know just how
your smile would
shade

could taste the
colours of your
look

my hunger for the
moment happy


— Esker, Jul 17, 2010

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Region, Country: north ontario, CAN

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Seren

Seren

15 years 10 months ago

there is a knowing in

there is a knowing in feeling eyes that look without looking as they devour your profile and dart away into a silence intent gaze as the nose turns the lingering inspection wafts the air and we cannot but notice lovely verse Steven love and hugs JayCee (“To be yourself in a world that is constantly trying to make you something else is the greatest accomplishment.” ~ Ralph Waldo Emerson quote)
Esker

Esker

15 years 10 months ago

they were always..

trying to get me to look into peoples eyes I do breifly just so much else going on details are so important we can see them and overlook them Nothing disguises like the obvious the greatest keys right there casting shadows with all other shadows I paint faces and sketch faces when I want too I love Fred Varley (canadian) Andrew Wyeth (american) Gustav Klimpt (european) Im not a great technical artist but Im good enough to call myself one I have my own style and Im good in putting life into eyes which is hard to do Here we do not look upon our faces reading or writing its just words yet the face is everything tells everything to those trained and there are such beautiful eyes I used to want to be in advertising or promotion and love all the ads with faces poetry is just one small interest of my many great interests
Kailashana

Kailashana

15 years 10 months ago

Outstanding! Amoung your

Outstanding! Amoung your very best, Steven. Breathtakingly honest, coloured with layers of intensity and tenderness, with insight and expenditure. Your poetry will never be *lonely*. Light, Anna "There is a kind of mysticism to writing." ~ Irvine Welsh
R

raskin

15 years 10 months ago

The great hunting birds

The great hunting birds wings whisper quiet before they snare. I like the part about stretching legs out. People watching is a good pastime, Raskin
Nordic cloud

Nordic cloud

15 years 10 months ago

Zing!

Ann of Norway The salt seers into the wounds the open shapes of words swallow you as the clothes pegs shake and the strong face penetrates the skin to melt the waxed fingers of you eyes and carry you over the window sill tipping you into my desires your hair tips flashing glamourously your diaphanous gown tight against your bones your sketch painted in the colours of my psychedelic glasses Ann