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a squirrel is but a rabbit with a long tail

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a squirrel is
but a rabbit
with a long tail


when you eat the hard-
boiled egg, be sure to ingest
its shell; when you eat

the apple, do not
forget its core, its dark and
bitter seeds; and don't

discard its skin; set
aside its stem remainder 
to place with reverence

beneath its mother
tree as a charity to
the common deer; when

you eat well-cooked fish
from a can and mark the bones
as soft, eat them too;

it should be wise to
respect the dandelion:
take it to salad

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— barbsdad2003, Jul 17, 2010

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Kailashana

Kailashana

15 years 10 months ago

…do you know how to make

...do you know how to make dandelion wine mr ee? http://www.texascooking.com/recipes/dandelionwine.htm http://www.google.com/imgres?imgurl=http://shotgunwildatheart.files.wordpress.com/2009/04/dandelion_wine.jpg&imgrefurl=http://shotgunwildatheart.wordpress.com/2009/04/14/dandelion-wine/&usg=__G3Qj363hQLSvAWW6WaUSrMp7_LY=&h=345&w=500&sz=110&hl=en&start=2&um=1&itbs=1&tbnid=1LHgdvIH410knM:&tbnh=90&tbnw=130&prev=/images%3Fq%3Ddandelion%2Bwine%26um%3D1%26hl%3Den%26sa%3DX%26rlz%3D1B3GGLL_enUS386US386%26tbs%3Disch:1 ."There is a kind of mysticism to writing." ~ Irvine Welsh
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Marie-I-Be

15 years 10 months ago

tender

You have taken a lot of care with this, Chuck---with the form and with the content. My feeling is that I'm reading precious lines from Chuck's Book of Wisdom. Your tenderness and respect toward your environment close and away are nothing short of inspirational. One of my favorites within: to place with reverence beneath its mother tree as a charity to the common deer