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Jul 17, 2010
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recalls to me the sea
recalls to me the sea
all I observe
recalls to me the sea
leaves of every tree stirred by a breeze
with grace, birds flying
each wind that blows
in memory, echo of seagulls' call
for riggings, coils of rope
on top of a beer, the foam
smoothness of a woman's thigh
at night, stars
line of any horizon
in mountains, a clear spring of water
roar of thunder storms
lashing rain
over landscapes, sunrise
moon glow
fog in hollows
of any day, calmness
of all description, clouds
my heart, married to the sea
best relationship I have had.
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— Victorclaude, Jul 17, 2010
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raskin
15 years 10 months ago
Some great imagery
Victorclaude
15 years 10 months ago
Thank you, Raskin.Victor
magics02
15 years 10 months ago
I must say
Victorclaude
15 years 10 months ago
Mona, Thanks so much for the
xena465
15 years 10 months ago
WoW Vicotor
Victorclaude
15 years 10 months ago
Xena,You are more than