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You are No Loser, no loser

You are No Loser, no loser

Than any other Cancerian,

The world’s losers

Shall I name some?

Nelson Mandela 

Dalai Lama

Of course

Julius Caesar
and

Diana
the Royal princess

All deprived while alive,

But only they live

And shall live

In the hearts of mankind,

As also you will

In paradise

Who evaluates

Winners and losers
when next time you come
to the Fairview Mall 

Look around and you shall find me
standing tall,

Err, err, err....
than all

For I hate to accept myself

As a loser

We become
what we say
so,

 If you want to be remembered

Always,
after wards
a loser you may stay

But then you shall live

Not in my heart
but
far
far…………….

Far ………… away

 

— loved, Jul 17, 2010

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scribbler

15 years 10 months ago

loser

LOL can't....help....laughing at line 24 hahaha.Sniff and wipe eyes.I thought a good write of becoming what you perceive yourself to be......heh!heh! line 24.....scribbler
loved

loved

15 years 10 months ago

when we laugh we enjoy life

at least we have company and don't weep alone thats the whole purpose of life llllllaaaaaaaaaaaaaffffffffffffffffff fffffffffffff isn't it?????????????