Join the Neopoet online poetry workshop and community to improve as a writer, meet fellow poets, and showcase your work. Sign up, submit your poetry, and get started.
Jul 16, 2010
⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)
NOT OVER
Well they finally fixed the leak
I know 'cause I just took a peek
I realize that it was tough
but it took them long enough
Do you think crises is over?
then ask the oil coated plover
its just the end of oil leaking
that's not all that we are seeking
The cleanup is and always was
primary mission of this cause
not all oil has surfaced yet
to threaten so much land thats wet
How long 'fore gulf folks get their wish
to resume business and start to fish
their entire economy
is far from what it used to be
Does instigator expect praise?
thats a pasture they won't graze
praise for doing what they should !
makes me laugh both loud and good
I share most the local's fears
normalcy won't return for years
who knows how long that it will be
before gulf is really oil-free
I know 'cause I just took a peek
I realize that it was tough
but it took them long enough
Do you think crises is over?
then ask the oil coated plover
its just the end of oil leaking
that's not all that we are seeking
The cleanup is and always was
primary mission of this cause
not all oil has surfaced yet
to threaten so much land thats wet
How long 'fore gulf folks get their wish
to resume business and start to fish
their entire economy
is far from what it used to be
Does instigator expect praise?
thats a pasture they won't graze
praise for doing what they should !
makes me laugh both loud and good
I share most the local's fears
normalcy won't return for years
who knows how long that it will be
before gulf is really oil-free
— scribbler, Jul 16, 2010
Share this poem
Critiques
poewriter58
15 years 10 months ago
Stan
scribbler
15 years 10 months ago
over
faithmairee
15 years 10 months ago
I Really Like This
scribbler
15 years 10 months ago
over
Seren
15 years 10 months ago
Dear Stan
scribbler
15 years 10 months ago
over
Lil Z
15 years 10 months ago
Impressive write!
scribbler
15 years 10 months ago
over
jetz
15 years 10 months ago
Hi Scribbler, Certainly a
scribbler
15 years 10 months ago
over
raskin
15 years 10 months ago
Topical rhyme on current
scribbler
15 years 10 months ago
over