faithmairee

Jul 16, 2010 ⭐ See this poem's read count — a supporter feature

tell it to me gently

i love life
and yet i couldn't live
in a world without love

and you-
i will love you always
for you are more precious
to me than life itself

loving you comes easily
and leaving you
i m p o s s i b l e

yet should you ever fall
out of love with me
please tell me-
but tell it to me gently

— faithmairee, Jul 16, 2010

About the Author

Region, Country: Florida, United States, USA

Favorite Poets: Lawrence Ferlinghetti, Edna St. Vincent Millay, Lucille Clifton and Elizabeth Bishop

Critiques

Lonnie

16 years ago

A well-penned poem

Gentle is as gentle does, and so I gently say that I like this poem for what it says, but would love it if it were a tad stronger! You have it in you to do this, I am quite sure! Go girl!

faithmairee

16 years ago

gently

thanks ~I never say anything I don't mean nor do I say anything to be mean.~

Candlewitch

16 years ago

Dear Faith

I love the way you spelled impossibly with a space between each letter, It made the word really stand out to the fullest of the meaning. Always, Cat

faithmairee

16 years ago

Dear Cat

Thank you so much, Cat. Yes, that was my intention. I appreciate your wonderful remarks! Love-Faith ~I never say anything I don't mean nor do I say anything to be mean.~

shirley harrison

16 years ago

"Beautiful"

Dear Faith, i think you and i share the same type of heart! truly beautiful, and something that i strongly believe in Saying it gently! with much love shirl.... shirley harrison

faithmairee

16 years ago

Thank You, Shirley

Thank you for your kind words. You made my heart smile! I'm honored by your wonderful remarks. Love-Faith ~I never say anything I don't mean nor do I say anything to be mean.~

Kailashana

16 years ago

If only there were some

If only there were some original metaphors! The ending is quite wonderful and makes the poem even so. Light, Anna "There is a kind of mysticism to writing." ~ Irvine Welsh

faithmairee

16 years ago

Gently

Thanks, Anna ~I never say anything I don't mean nor do I say anything to be mean.~

Ayaz Warith

16 years ago

Great

Dear Faith, Yes I tell it gently that your love is very well expressed. Sweet expression. Thanks! Ayaz

faithmairee

16 years ago

Thank You

Dear Ayaz-Thank you so much for your lovely comments on my poem. I appreciate them! Love-Faith ~I never say anything I don't mean nor do I say anything to be mean.~

Ayaz Warith

16 years ago

Great

Dear Faith, Yes I tell it gently that your love is very well expressed. Sweet expression. Thanks! Ayaz

magics02

16 years ago

Love of a write my friend

You say it so well and love is sure to tell Great Poetess Love, Mona xoxox

faithmairee

16 years ago

Dar Mona

Thank you so much! You just made my heart smile!!!! Love ya-Faith ~I never say anything I don't mean nor do I say anything to be mean.~

scribbler

16 years ago

gently

sweet succinct write on hoped for charity......scribbler

faithmairee

16 years ago

Thank You So Much

I know I thanked you in chat tonight but I just wanted to say thanks again. Love-Faith ~I never say anything I don't mean nor do I say anything to be mean.~

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