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a heartbeat away
a heartbeat away
ceiling patterns change
day progresses and passes
light from different angles,
shadows of multiple shades
conceptions, conceits, cogitations
arrive, stand present, leave, or linger
while new shoes create blisters
on feet used to no shoes at all
music from basement dives
filters onto street’s hardness
softens it for a moment,
then gone
we all are a moment away from
total humiliation, and we still
try the deal out
to steal out
a bit for ourselves ~~
a moment or two of what
we may name bliss
while lights stare down,
not from the sun, but made
by man lining streets
empty
our volition waivers
we try to see backroad
our feet walked yesterday
find it gone, but memory of it
exhausted the way
again and a day
brilliance of neurons firing
thoughts alive and well
gimme some of that ol’ timey
grease
gimme some reverence
have a heart from where your heart
lives
chimes of morning ring
break our fast
startled by a new day
constructed once more
from retrospect’s province
light the way with curiosity
a melody in your brain --
a memoir
liberate your only mind
nirvana is waiting
a heartbeat away.
vcp
Critiques
Kailashana
15 years 10 months ago
“Ecstasy is the New
Victorclaude
15 years 10 months ago
Thank you, Anna.Victor
Seren
15 years 10 months ago
Dear Victor
Victorclaude
15 years 10 months ago
Thank you, Jayne,Almost
Lonnie
15 years 10 months ago
A very powerful poetic picture of life!
Victorclaude
15 years 10 months ago
Lonnie, All that I write
loved
15 years 10 months ago
assigned as
Victorclaude
15 years 10 months ago
Loved,Someone was annoyed?