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The Hearts They're Printed On

Beauty fades,
memory, too

what lingers is almost gone;

but everything
that's e'er been said,

affects the heart that it's printed on.

~

There will arrive
a time to feel,

like taking back all you've said;

but, you'll soon see
how bad they're hurt,

because those words swim in their head.

~

Each day is
a blank canvas,

I'll be careful to say and act;

the way I feel,
overall;

to respond, and not react.

~

I've done harm
to many minds,

and when I think the hurt is gone;

I find myself
repairing all,

the hearts, my words are printed on.
— docmaverick, Jul 16, 2010

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About the Author

Region, Country: The High Desert, in the wild west, southern California, U.S. of A.., USA

Favorite Poets: Keates, Poe, Dickinson, and Dr. Seuss. There are a smattering of others, but why bother listing 'em all, ya know?, I also rely on a few of our poets, here....for advice, and what not. I couldn't possibly explain what a fountain of live, effective knowledge we have...right here in our midst ! To catch a glimmer of brilliance, merely visit: the Stream.

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Critiques

Seren

Seren

15 years 10 months ago

Dearest Doc

beautiful poignancy to this one my friend ... who of us can say we havent said something we regret most though dont care and more to the next heart ... but there are those who backtrack and reprint an image thats not to jarring ... sorry affected by your poem my friend .... just reminising love and big hugs JayCee x x x nominated (Quote~~"It is by universal misunderstanding that all agree. For if, by ill luck, people understood each other, they would never agree. "--Charles Baudelaire)
docmaverick

docmaverick

15 years 10 months ago

Thanx to you, CeeJay....

...for it was your quote posted, that was instrumental in my exploring this avenue. I don't know exactly how poignant that is.....but, I needed to say this. Thanx, again. "Write on"! sincerely, #{:-{)}8==== docmaverick.
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scribbler

15 years 10 months ago

hearts

WOW I second nomination.......scribbler
docmaverick

docmaverick

15 years 10 months ago

Scribbler....

...I tip my hat to yours. Thanx, for the support. I always appreciate your "thought out" commentaries, because they're exactly that....."thought out", rather than merely "out spoken". If that makes any sense, then maybe I am, "poignant". :) "Write on"! sincerely, #{:-{)}8==== docmaverick.
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Lonnie

15 years 10 months ago

Poignant and powerful!

A bravely-written piece loaded with truth, wisdom, and strong emotion! Worthy of five stars from anyone, and I give mine wholeheartedly!
docmaverick

docmaverick

15 years 10 months ago

I appreciate your support, Lonnie....

...and your critique. This was going to be part of another poem, because of the rhyme scheme.....but, at the last minute I saw a chance to "fix" it, so it could be a poem all by itself. I was worried, but now.....I am not. The other way, the message might've been lost. Thanx, again. "Write on"! sincerely, #{:-{)}8==== docmaverick.
AW

Antoinette Mar…

15 years 10 months ago

Most definately....very powerful....and.....

so worthy of the stars....makes one sit back and think of all the hearts printed upon, through somethings said, and not even realized at the time.....Thanks for reminding us to watch our words Doc.... Antoinette Mari
AW

Antoinette Mar…

15 years 10 months ago

Most definately....very powerful....and.....

so worthy of the stars....makes one sit back and think of all the hearts printed upon, through somethings said, and not even realized at the time.....Thanks for reminding us to watch our words Doc....an informative and beautiful write Antoinette Mari