Kite

Nicely done. It has a delicate beauty all its own.

lovely compact write of inspiration......scribbler

Dennis-Your poem is wonderful. I love it. Great poem from beginning to end. Love-Faith ~I never say anything I don't mean nor do I say anything to be mean.~

I called in to check messages I wont be round much the next couple of days but I noticed this ... I just wanted you to know I thought it ... exquisite sigh sigh sigh love and hugs JayCee (Quote~~"It is by universal misunderstanding that all agree. For if, by ill luck, people understood each other, they would never agree. "--Charles Baudelaire)

...whether, or not you were referring to an omnipotent being.....or, a woman.....this was a nice write; so I believed it necessary to referr to it, as such. Enjoyed it, "Write on"! sincerely, #{:-{)}8==== docmaverick.

Dear Dennis, i could see this piece i love it! like Stan said insperationl! with much love shirl...... shirley harrison

I like the concept, the language use, and the imagery in this piece! It says tons without wasting words! Bravo Sir!

I could imagine myself as your kite...lovely.

This is one of my most favourite of your wonderful poetic works-of-art, Dennis.A stunning metaphoric write, filled with resplendent imagery and detail. I feel the freedom of the Kite as I read and I love how you ask that someone so special to take your hand and help you navigate - how could she possibly refuse such a loving request. Beautiful flow to the poem and it is a flawless poetic gem so fairly crafted by your poetic/artistic pen. Thank you so very much for sharing Dennis. Truly lovely work!