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Dennis Go
Dennis Go
Jul 15, 2010 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Kite

Up in the heavens
Over this mortal plane...
Watch me glide with hovered wings.

I can feel the winds rush
Around this surreal fin
Of satin paper, wooden frame;
Lifting up my hollow skin.

Be my navigator.
The tides of the air restrict me.
Take my hand through the skies...
I can only fly by your gentle love strings.
— Dennis Go, Jul 15, 2010

About This Poem

About the Author

Region, Country: Manila, PHL

Favorite Poets: R.S. Thomas, William Blake, Emily Dickinson, Dylan Thomas

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sempervirens

15 years 10 months ago

Nicely done. It has a

Nicely done. It has a delicate beauty all its own.
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scribbler

15 years 10 months ago

kite

lovely compact write of inspiration......scribbler
faithmairee

faithmairee

15 years 10 months ago

Wonderful Work

Dennis-Your poem is wonderful. I love it. Great poem from beginning to end. Love-Faith ~I never say anything I don't mean nor do I say anything to be mean.~
Seren

Seren

15 years 10 months ago

Dear Dennis

I called in to check messages I wont be round much the next couple of days but I noticed this ... I just wanted you to know I thought it ... exquisite sigh sigh sigh love and hugs JayCee (Quote~~"It is by universal misunderstanding that all agree. For if, by ill luck, people understood each other, they would never agree. "--Charles Baudelaire)
docmaverick

docmaverick

15 years 10 months ago

Yesss, Mr Go....

...whether, or not you were referring to an omnipotent being.....or, a woman.....this was a nice write; so I believed it necessary to referr to it, as such. Enjoyed it, "Write on"! sincerely, #{:-{)}8==== docmaverick.
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shirley harrison

15 years 10 months ago

Just Breathtaking!

Dear Dennis, i could see this piece i love it! like Stan said insperationl! with much love shirl...... shirley harrison
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Mari Shine

15 years 10 months ago

This is one of my most

This is one of my most favourite of your wonderful poetic works-of-art, Dennis.A stunning metaphoric write, filled with resplendent imagery and detail. I feel the freedom of the Kite as I read and I love how you ask that someone so special to take your hand and help you navigate - how could she possibly refuse such a loving request. Beautiful flow to the poem and it is a flawless poetic gem so fairly crafted by your poetic/artistic pen. Thank you so very much for sharing Dennis. Truly lovely work!